An Injured Experience-Draft 1

When I was a little girl, an accident happened to me. That day, I played with my younger sister in the park near my home. Afterwards, I competed with her in running. I was fill with self-confident that I would win, but I slipped and fell over. Suddenly, my chin was in great pain. Then I saw much blood on the ground. Formerly, my chin was losing lots of blood. I was too painful to say anything. At the time, my parents came out and were amazed why I got hurt. They took me to the hospital quickly. The doctor operated on me to suture my chin's wound. After that, I always act carefully for fear that extreme pleasure should be followed by sorrow.

A Dream I Had -Draft 2

I am afraid of insects, especially cockroaches. The fear even got into my dream. What a terrible dream it was! In it, a large cockroach ran after me. I ran very fast until I found a house and went inside. I wanted to hide from it, but, to my surprise, when I shut the door, I found that the first floor was full of cockroaches. I was so scared that I climbed up along the stair quickly to far away from them, but they never gave up chasing me. At the moment, I saw a window in frond of me. I burst open the window and jumped from it to outside without thinking. I guessed that I would die by falling but not. I was amazed that I could fly around the sky. Suddenly, I felt something strange and breathed hard. Because of a black hole sucked me in. At that point, I woke up in my bed, breaking heavily but thankful that it had all been just a dream. I thought that I should try to overcome the fear of cockroaches to be more courageous.