Saturday, October 06, 2007

An Injured Experience-Draft 1

When I was a little girl, an accident happened to me. That day, I played with my younger sister in the park near my home. Afterwards, I competed with her in running. I was fill with self-confident that I would win, but I slipped and fell over. Suddenly, my chin was in great pain. Then I saw much blood on the ground. Formerly, my chin was losing lots of blood. I was too painful to say anything. At the time, my parents came out and were amazed why I got hurt. They took me to the hospital quickly. The doctor operated on me to suture my chin's wound. After that, I always act carefully for fear that extreme pleasure should be followed by sorrow.

3 Comments:

Blogger Fanny said...

It must be very hurt.
so terrible!

12:00 AM, October 07, 2007  
Blogger 美萱 said...

" I was fill with self-confident that I would win,"-->"be filled with "或"full of "
It is really terrible and pain.

8:12 AM, October 12, 2007  
Blogger Dora said...

You wrote well,and I think that you can make your sentences longer.

2:29 AM, October 14, 2007  

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