Making Decisions-Draft One
Growing up means making my own decisions. When I was a child, adults made a lot of decisions for me. Now, being a teenager that will answer for my own decisions. I am growing more independent and self-reliant. My family cannot make some decisions for me. Consequently, I have to start learning to decide for myself.
The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing which department I should choose in National Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School. After receiving my report card of my BC test, I wanted to be admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School. But I did not establish which department I should choose. Suddenly, I read that it instituted the Department of Applied Foreign Language in the first year. Because I am interested in English, I chose to study it. I thought that I made the right decision.
The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing which department I should choose in National Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School. After receiving my report card of my BC test, I wanted to be admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School. But I did not establish which department I should choose. Suddenly, I read that it instituted the Department of Applied Foreign Language in the first year. Because I am interested in English, I chose to study it. I thought that I made the right decision.
posted by Jenny at
6/13/2007 08:28:00 PM
5 Comments:
我覺得你第一段寫的很好。
"National Tainan Commercial Vocational High Senior School"-->"National Tainan Cimmercial Vocational Senior High School"
"I have to start learning to decide for myself."
may change into
"I have to start to learn to decide for myself."
"I read that it instituted the Department of Applied Foreign Language in the first year."--> I think "I read the Department of Applied Foreign Language which was instituted in the first year."
Congratulations. You made the right dicision.
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