Autobiography-1-Draft One
My name is Chen-Yi Chu. I was born in Tainan. I am a seventeen-year-old girl. And I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational School. I have an English name called Jenny. There are four members in my family. My father is a kind and down-to-earth person. My mother is a career woman. She works in a beauty parlor. My younger sister is a senior high school student. She is pretty easy to do with. My family fills with warm and fragrant. I hit it off well with my family. When I was chapfallen, they would speak words of cheer to me. I love my family very much.
I am responsible for doing everything. It gives me great pleasure to help those need help. I am interested in English. I spend much time promoting the four skills of listening, speaking, reading, and writing. I love to play the flute, draw some illustration, play badminton, and listen to classical music. I used to be a member of the class of wind music in junior high school. I learn to team up with our wind. I consider drawing as a great way to work off my mood. I can control my mood efficiently. The former helps me relieve my pressure and the latter makes me become more artistic.

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*they would speak words of cheer to me.* should change to *they would speak some words to cheer me. *
"It gives me great pleasure to help those need help. "change to " It gives me great pleasue to help those who need help."
"She is pretty easy to do with."
這句後面還有嗎?我看不懂你的意思耶
I think you draw very well.
I also want to draw as well as you!
I agree with Phoebe.
I don't know that mean?
Do your best!
I think you wrote well, just change somewhere the other classmates said.
Yes!Every time I see your picture It makes me amaze . you really do it well.
You write perfact!
Your article is flawless.
You make it very well.
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