Thursday, February 15, 2007

Tips for Staying Healthy-Draft One

There are three major tips for staying healthy. First, taking exercise reqularly is a great way. In fact, you do not need heavy exercise to feel better. Your health will get better even with light exercise, like walking. Second, you eat a balance diet. For example, you must eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating junk food. If you eat right, you will see the difference in your health. Finally, you sleep eight hours a night, you will keep in a brisk vitality all day. The more you take care of your body and your mind, the happier you will be.

8 Comments:

Blogger FawnYma said...

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10:45 PM, February 24, 2007  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

This article is good.
I don't find the wrong words or
grammar.

7:46 PM, February 28, 2007  
Blogger candy said...

"regularly"
heavy exercise is a noun so you should add "a" or "s"

7:48 PM, February 28, 2007  
Blogger Dora said...

"First, taking exercise *reqularly is a great way."
*reqularly should change to regularly.

7:53 PM, February 28, 2007  
Blogger 娜娜 said...

*If you eat right* should change to * If what you eat is right*.

7:58 PM, February 28, 2007  
Blogger Fanny said...

"Finally, you sleep eight hours a night" you can plus "if"
"Finally, if you sleep eight hours a night"

8:00 PM, February 28, 2007  
Blogger 美萱 said...

Your article is explicit about how to stay healthy.

5:05 AM, March 02, 2007  
Blogger  said...

"If you eat right"you can change to
"If you have a nice food and drink".
Your article is very nice.

4:51 AM, March 04, 2007  

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